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I don’t write horror or flash fiction. Except, apparently, when I do…

In response flash fiction challenge from Charli Mills at Carrot Ranch: August 15, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes a sweet jam. It can take you to the kitchen or the smokey room of a back-alley bar. What makes it sweet? Go where the prompt leads you!
Everything Tastes Better With Jam
She hesitated, then entered the alley, her stilettos clicking, hands cradling the large jar. Under a streetlight, dark windows on all sides and dead end ahead, she stopped. Her follower straightened, light glancing off the blade in his hand.
She turned, smiling.
Silent figures gathered behind her attacker, surrounding him. One held out an arm for her sweet jam. “Glad you could make it. How’s your mama?”
She waited politely until the screaming stopped. “She’s good. Sends love.” Over the slurping sounds, she raised her voice. “Sorry I’m late. I had to pick up takeout on the way over.”
Gloriously chilling, Barb…
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Thanks!
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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Thank you so much for the reblog!
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Hahahahah. And ewwww! Well done!
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I know! How did something so gross come from me????
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Hidden talents my friend. Hidden talents
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OMG! 😂 I LOVE THIS! I write dark and flash so…I’m well-versed in both. bows Awesome. 😈
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Usually I write humor, so I have to say this surprised the heck out of me. But I’m really flattered you liked it.
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I’ve surprised myself numerous times writing flash. It’s awesome. Now that you’ve gotten a taste, perhaps you could be lured to the Dark Side… 🖤
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So much fun! I wrote one from the other perspective a long time ago 🙂 https://jagahdilmein.wordpress.com/2017/12/18/creatures-of-the-dark/
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I want a WordPress button that says “love” because I totally LOVE your post. 💕 Thanks so much for sharing it!
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Awwww, thank you so so much, really appreciate it 🙂
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Great dialog, Barb! I appreciate the way you wove the politeness of the conversation around the horrific action. It adds to the quirkiness!
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That is dark. Well done.
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I really liked this!
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